My reflection: I think that I did not do any were near enough work because I think I spent to much time on maths.

My partner reflection: Riley did not finish his work because he was working on maths for to long. in future Riley needs to manage his time better.

persuasive evidence

March 20, 2014

 

 

 

learning objective: Learn how to get more supporting evidence in a persuasive piece.

SUCCESS CRITERIA: We are successful when we figure out how to put more evidence in our writing.

 

 

 

 

HERE ARE TWO PERSUASIVE TEXTS ONE WITH EVIDENCE AND ONE WITH NO EVIDENCE.

WITHOUT EVIDENCE

Trees should not be cut down it ruins the environment and looks bad. Not only that, but if we cut the trees down then we can’t breathe and then we will all die. People need to care more about the environment, like by not using too much paper because paper is made out of trees and the more trees we cut down the more animals habitats will be destroyed.

WITH EVIDENCE

Trees should not be cut down. Trees are the things that make us breathe because the tree breathes in carbon dioxide [which is what we breathe out] and then it breathes out air [which is what we breathe in] so if we cut down all the trees we will die. Also the next thing is we need to take care of the environment and to do that we need to use a lot less paper, paper is made out of trees and to make it we need to cut down so many trees to make a little bit of paper. Not only that but if we cut down all the trees we will destroy all the animals habitats like the Orangutans. they chop down the Orangutans habitats for something called palm oil.

 

 

Madison Elliot

March 18, 2014

I think Madison Elliot is A great role model to all disabled people  and all people should look up to her because she didn’t give up and she didn’t get worried about not been able to make it. I think it would of been really hard to train and swim in the Paralympics. It would be amazing for her to meat all her hero’s but now she is a hero to other people.But not only been able to swim in the Paralympics but to win silver bronze and even gold is amazing. good luck Madison Elliot,  have a good one.

 

Organ donations

March 5, 2014

What do you think about organ donation?

How do you think you would feel if you were in the same position?

Do You think compulsory organ donation should be introduced? Why?

I think organ donation is a good idea because it can help people who need it more than you.

I think I would not feel veary good if no one donated but if someone did I would feel veary happy.

No not everyone has to do it is good too but it is there choice.

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